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two hearts beating in the dark

topic posted Fri, January 9, 2009 - 3:35 PM by  Unsubscribed
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Her eyes drew him to her
Like a moth seeking oblivion
The mirth that played across her face
Was a joy to behold
Her laugh was contagious and sincere
Her form was that of a Goddess earthbound
At once he wanted her and feared her
This was no common maiden
To be wooded and won over
Her eyes alone told him this
Before him was a true lady
One of intelligence and grace
This he learned as he sat among the throng and
Listened to her speak
His eyes never left hers for long
She moved like a feral creature
No wasted motions, Grace incarnate
If he only knew her heart shipped a beat
Every time she dared look at him
She knew he would laugh if he ever suspected
Her grace was born of fear
Fear of dropping her cup
Fear of tripping over something in the dark
So she moved very slowly in everything she did
Quoting every poet and Playwright she knew
Trying to make him stay close to her
They were two fools for love both ached for
Passions first kiss yet neither dared
So they Danced all night…
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    Re: two hearts beating in the dark

    Mon, January 12, 2009 - 9:36 PM
    Sweet and familiar ring to your words.
    They warm my heart and bring a tear to my eye.

    My favorite lines .......
    This was no common maiden
    To be wooded and won over
    Her eyes alone told him this
    Before him was a true lady
    One of intelligence and grace

    and then just to spend the night dancing.... or do you mean something else?
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      Re: two hearts beating in the dark

      Tue, January 13, 2009 - 1:10 PM
      “and then just to spend the night dancing.... or do you mean something else?”

      To dance…
      With words…
      With touch…
      With lips…
      Then bodies…
      Emotions dance around our hearts until souls touch…

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